How we wrote the offer letter that changed our lives
— Download the guide to write yours
We secured our Alaskan dream homestead for $350,000 under asking — and the sellers told us the only reason they went that low was because of our letter.
This guide teaches you how to write a letter that can make that kind of difference.
The Story
When we toured the property that would become The Wilds, we knew it was the one.
But we also knew our offer was nowhere near the highest. So we wrote a letter — honest, heartfelt, and rooted in our story. When the sellers called us to accept our offer, they said:
“We read your letter out loud, and we knew. That’s the only reason we were willing to go that low.”
That moment changed the course of our life. And now I’m sharing the exact framework we used — so you can craft a letter that truly resonates, too.
Need extra help? You can book a 1:1 session with me—complete with a Zoom call—so we can polish your offer letter line by line.
What’s inside the GUIDE?
A step-by-step structure for writing a winning offer letter | The exact storytelling framework we used — simple, effective, repeatable.
The psychology of what sellers respond to | How to speak to their heart and values without sounding cheesy or forced.
Story prompts that help you uncover your “why” | Because a powerful letter is built on meaning, not fluff.
How to identify the details that matter | The little things that make a seller feel like: “They truly see this home.”
A complete plug-and-play template | So you’re never staring at a blank page.
A mindset shift that prepares you before you even tour a home | (Read this guide more than once before house hunting — it will change what you notice, feel, and write.)
Just $19 to write a letter that could change your life
Who is this
guide for?
First time homebuyers
Homesteaders looking for their dream property
Anyone buying in a competitive market
Families hoping to stand out without overbidding
People who feel overwhelmed by where to begin
Buyers who want to tell a story that truly reflects who they are
Fair Housing Laws
Your offer letter should reflect your heart, your values, and the way a home makes you feel—but it also needs to stay within Fair Housing guidelines. These rules exist to protect everyone involved in the transaction and ensure fairness. Some brokerages allow personal letters, others do not.Some allow photos, others prohibit them entirely.
That’s why we always recommend: Before buying this guide, talk with your realtor. They’ll tell you what’s permitted where you’re buying and how to present your letter safely and respectfully.
This guide is crafted with those guidelines in mind, so you can write with confidence and stay fully compliant.
Ready to write the perfect letter?
$19
A great offer letter won’t compensate for an unrealistic bid…But it can be the tie-breaker — the thing that tips the scales when numbers are close.Most buyers write generic, forgettable letters.This guide teaches you how to write one that sellers actually feel.
$19
THE FULL LETTER
Don’t Forget to Add This at Checkout
I’ve included something special as an optional add-on — our exact offer letter.
The one woven with family, hope, loss, longing, and the dream of returning to Alaska.
The one the sellers told us moved them enough to accept an offer far lower than others.
I’ve annotated it line by line so you can see:
🌲 how the story unfolds
🌲 where emotion meets strategy
🌲 why small details matter
🌲 how to write with sincerity and purpose
If you love learning from real examples, you’ll love this one.
Add it to your purchase for $7.
Ready to write the letter that could change everything?
Elise
Giordano
THE WILDS
Before moving to our Alaska homestead, I spent years as a professional journalist, trained to tell stories that connect and move people.
I used those same storytelling principles to craft our offer letter — the one that helped us secure our property for $350k under asking.
Now I help others write letters that sellers remember.
Need extra help?
You can book a 1:1 session with me—complete with a Zoom call—so we can polish your offer letter line by line.